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Charles Bastille's avatar

All of it, and especially...

"which floorboards will wake them."

Alec Solomita's avatar

just wonderful, so moving

Tom Calarco's avatar

Beautiful poem, Jo. It hit home to me.

Jim Cummings's avatar

This is just perfect.

Marian Grudko's avatar

Beautiful, Jo. You touched my heart.

Jo-Anne Rosen's avatar

Beautiful poem, thank you.

B. Lynn Goodwin's avatar

Long live human processing and critical thinking.

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Tim Wright's avatar

Touches on the differences between humans and machines.

Victor Gutierrez's avatar

She deserves the exposure of her excellent talent. Beautifully done.

Joe Sylvester's avatar

Beautifully written, it speaks the truth about AI and why it can never replace our humanity.

Emma Caswell's avatar

If I could heart this twice, I would 🖋️📜🍂

Anne Wilkins's avatar

I'm just echoing what everyone else has said. Excellent, beautiful poem.

Vee's avatar

Wonderful.

really liked that!

Glenna Turnbull's avatar

What a beautiful poem. Thank you so much for sharing. I love, how you take your tea...and the silence when something is wrong.